You can't attend a meeting with your friend.In your letter:cancel the meeting and apologiesexplain why you cancelsuggest where and when you could see each other

Essay topics:

You can't attend a meeting with your friend.
In your letter:
cancel the meeting and apologies
explain why you cancel
suggest where and when you could see each other

Dear Mohammad,

Hi. How’s life treating you ? What are you up to these days? Sorry for not being in touch for so long.

I’m afraid that I have some bad news. I won’t be able to attend the meeting we arranged in next week although I did my best to do so. I’m terribly sorry and hope to be able to make it up to you.

My mother has become ill since last Sunday, which I suppose is due to the sudden cold weather. My crucial task these days is to give her the care she needs the most, and I won’t be able to leave her side till she gets better and receives the all clear from the doctor.

The doctor said the illness will be cured completely within 10 days. Thus, I’d be free after that to meet you. If it’s okay with you, let’s meet on the second Tuesday from now. I suggest we get together in one of Pulp bar’s branches in the afternoon and I treat you since I’m the one canceling the next week’s arrangement.

Again, I’m terribly sorry for not being able to meet you next week.

Pass my regards to your family.
Aidin

Votes
Average: 10 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, thus, i suppose

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45273631841 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28488274275 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641791044776 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5503461876 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.9285714286 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3571428571 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21428571429 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252889710634 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10502107379 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845503160247 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140467073293 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0773024598611 0.0580467560999 133% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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