You had dinner with your friend’s family. Write a letter to your friend and express your feelings about the dinner. In your letter, you should:
– Say what you enjoyed about the dinner
– Describe how you feel about his/her family
– Invite your friend and his/her family to your place.
Hi Bruce,
I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I'm writing this letter to express my gratitude for the dinner I had with you and your family.
With regard to the dinner, you know how much I love homemade food. The food cooked by your mother was toothsome. In fact, all the items were mouthwatering, especially the vegetable pizza followed by a chocolate brownie. Please say my special thanks to your mother for preparing such delicious food.
To be honest with you, I really enjoyed the welcoming gesture of your family. Your parents were so kind to me and your elder sister Tania is so adorable. She taught me some foosball tricks and I'm pretty sure that these tricks are going to benefit me in my next tournament. Your parents always consider me as an integral part of your family which I like most.
I was wondering if you could join me with your parents and sister on my birthday next month at my residence. My sister Anna, she's is really an amazing chef and If I remember correctly you have had food cooked by her before. I hope you'll not turn me down and will be part of this celebration.
I look forward to your presence on this special occasion.
Best Wishes,
James
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, as to, in fact, you know, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6334841629 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3958325303 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592760180995 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.8783478779 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.2666666667 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7333333333 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343920492938 0.216113520407 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122319524779 0.0766984524023 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104189920802 0.0603063233224 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201239424767 0.12726935374 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823960385769 0.0580467560999 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.