You have been doing some voluntary work to help your local community. However, now you are unable to continue doing this work.
Write a letter to the manager of the organisation where you have been working. In your letter
- describe the work you have been doing.
- explain why you can no longer do this work.
- recommend another person who is interested in the work.
Hello Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you with regard my voluntary work I have done our local community.
I have been responsible for preparing Christmas present for kids from poor families, and orphan houses. Because of my Dad bad health condition I have to resign from my position. I would like to thank you for a pleasure to work with you and your team. It was such an amazing experience to be part of this project.
I want to recommend my best friend for my place. We have been friends for more than 20 years. I know he is very well and I can promise that he will fulfil his duties the best how he can.
I believe, that Frank is the best person for the who can replace me at the work.
If you have any more questions, please do not hesitate to contact me.
regards,
Tomasz Zawadzki
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 105, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... from poor families, and orphan houses. Because of my Dad bad health condition I have t...
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Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Regards
...ase do not hesitate to contact me. regards, Tomasz Zawadzki
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 661.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37748344371 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30775460731 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.682119205298 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 198.0 290.88556701 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7997847063 44.8134815571 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.0909090909 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7272727273 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.09090909091 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285304669641 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984180899135 0.0766984524023 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972912433392 0.0603063233224 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165853133495 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925729524416 0.0580467560999 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.53 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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