You have been invited to attend an interview for a place studying a course in a college. Unfortunately, because of a previous appointment you cannot come at the time they wish.Write a letter to the admissions tutor. In your letter-explain your position-ap

Hi Sir,

This is with reference to the interview for the course of Statistics that I have been invited for. I have received an invitation from the Dean for Monday,Feb 26th 2019 at 9:00 AM. I was scheduled to interview with couple of counselors.

Unfortunately due to a prior commitment it seems difficult to appear for the time mentioned. The reason being, I have to attend my daughters parent teacher meeting the same day at 9:30 AM. I committed to it two weeks ago and I am afraid I might not be able to change that since each parent is allotted a 15 minute time slot.

If there is possibility to reschedule the time, I would prefer coming in at anytime between Noon to 3:00PM. If that is already occupied, please feel free to reschedule me for any date and time in the coming week. I will make sure I will attend it. I am quite interested as it matches with my area of study and will give me a new horizon to launch my career from your esteemed university.

I would highly appreciate if you could please accommodate my request. Looking forward to hearing from you.

Thanks,
Shela M

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Feb
...d an invitation from the Dean for Monday,Feb 26th 2019 at 9:00 AM. I was scheduled t...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...areer from your esteemed university. I would highly appreciate if you could pl...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, i am afraid, with reference to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63438797446 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 282.6 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0457896737 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3846153846 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3846153846 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38461538462 4.34317383033 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213857426139 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659625173982 0.0766984524023 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449231530431 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117455021424 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465473920003 0.0580467560999 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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