You have been selected for a training course on computer skills that you cannot attend. Write a letter to your employer and say:
Explain how this training course would help you
Why won’t you be able to attend it
Suggest a way to have that training again
Dear Sir,
I have recently selected for a company funded computer training course, which will be commencing from the next week. However, it will not be feasible for me to join it due to some person emergencies.
Although i was quite excited about learning computer operating skills and looking desperately forward to it since many days, i got into this personal commitment, which can not be postponed or avoided. Perhaps, it has now become mandatory to everyone at the office to have basic expertise in performing different tasks on this device. If someone do not know how to work on this machine, it will put their job in to jeopardy. However, one of my close relatives met with an accident yesterday, and it is my responsibility to visit them. They live in London, hence i would have to take leave for at least 15 days, which is a minimum requirement to complete this visit.
Further, i would like to know if it is possible to pursue this training later this month. It would be a relief for me if it is feasible.
I hope you understand my situation and accuse me for this sudden withdrawal from this essential course.
Yours sincerely
Harpreet
Yours sincerely.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...o some person emergencies. Although i was quite excited about learning comput...
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Line 5, column 126, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...perately forward to it since many days, i got into this personal commitment, whic...
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Line 5, column 346, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'does'.
Suggestion: does
...ferent tasks on this device. If someone do not know how to work on this machine, i...
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Line 5, column 562, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... visit them. They live in London, hence i would have to take leave for at least 1...
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Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...nt to complete this visit. Further, i would like to know if it is possible to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, so, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86274509804 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71943536782 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642156862745 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4403448007 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1818181818 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224318876338 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772207094979 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462731283976 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134215875655 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229056941315 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.