Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company In your letter Describe the item you lost Explain how you lost it Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

Essay topics:

Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter:

Describe the item you lost
Explain how you lost it
Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to report the loss of my guitar, which was covered under your insurance policy.

My name is Harpreet, and my policy number is 7798260. Let me explain what had happened exactly in detail. Yesterday, i took a flight from Mumbai to Delhi at around 3 PM, and i was carrying this instrument with me because i took it to Mumbai along with me to show it to my cousin. However, while leaving the flight at the arrival, i forgot to take it and left it under my seat. Although i have reported this incident to the airport's lost and found section, i have not received any positive news yet. The color of the guitar is brown and black, and i bought it around 3 months ago from an online store. Further, it is of Yamaha brand and costs me 15000/- rupees.

As this item was covered under my insurance policy, i would like to know how can i claim the amount for my lost guitar. Also, would it possible for you to share the complete process on my mail ID, which is already there in your records.

Please do let me know if any further details are required from my end. Hoping for your prompt response on this.

Yours faithfully.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 1615.20841683 59% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37899543379 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24743830179 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611872146119 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9153839095 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.9166666667 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 7.06120827912 33% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168012649862 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598433077452 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620528659828 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117196675174 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754431474335 0.056905535591 133% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 50.2224549098 156% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 78.4519038076 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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