you have been sent an important document in a foreign language and you need it translated quickly. you have a friend who knows this language.Write a letter to your friend and ask him/her to translate an important document you have received. In your letter

Essay topics:

you have been sent an important document in a foreign language and you need it translated quickly. you have a friend who knows this language.
Write a letter to your friend and ask him/her to translate an important document you have received. In your letter say
– Why is it important for you?
– How fast do you need it back?
– Why do you need his/her expertise?

Dear haru,
Hope you are doing good and every one in your home is healthy.
As you know I have been trying for jobs abroad and applied for the same in different countries. I am pleased to tell you that I have received a letter from one of the companies.

Haru, the letter I got is written in foreign language that I am not much aware of so, its perplex for me whether it's a call for interview or just acknowledge of my mail. What so ever, this letter is extremely important for me as it will decide my future course of endeavours.

If I am not wrong then I remember you had not only completed a lesson in French but also scored highest in your batch. will you please help me in deciphering it in English? your guidance would be a great support for me as I don't find anyone, near my dwelling place, who has knowledge in French.

Although I know you must be busy in your day-to-day life, but I am sure you will find some time for your friend's career. I hope you will be able to translate this official document immediately as I need to respond them back quickly.

Waiting for your reply. See you soon.

Yours Aparajita.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 114, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...aware of so, its perplex for me whether its a call for interview or just acknowledg...
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Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Will
... but also scored highest in your batch. will you please help me in deciphering it in...
^^^^
Line 7, column 174, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Your
...e help me in deciphering it in English? your guidance would be a great support for m...
^^^^
Line 7, column 225, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ce would be a great support for me as I dont find anyone, near my dwelling place, wh...
^^^^
Line 11, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to respond them back quickly. Waiting for your reply. See you soon. Yours A...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 32.9175257732 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 926.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34741784038 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40311391076 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610328638498 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2914297574 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1666666667 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355569488912 0.216113520407 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128226750957 0.0766984524023 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598131451551 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177963603246 0.12726935374 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740449898861 0.0580467560999 128% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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