You have decided to do course abroad. Your friend lives in the same city where you plan to study.
Write to your friend explaining academic profile and expectations from course and University you have aimed for. Inquire all options of studying from her
In your letter,
Explain why you are not able to contact your friend earlier
Disclose your personal research from Canadian schools
Ask her for a suggestion
Hi Grace,
How are you? I am fine. Hope your studies are going well. I apologise as I was unable to be in touch with you by mail or chat, as i was held up with final exams.
As you are aware, we are planning to move to Toronto next month. I have completed my eleventh grade in computer science group. This year I would be in twelfth grade.
I have analysed few schools and found lady Violet, Bell master to be the best in Toronto for computer area. Also, understood from students in website review that there are additional coaching available for final year. Got to know that most school require student to be aware of French language also. Schoolmates talk both in French and English in school. So I have applied for spoken french language class here in India.
Please advice on the schools and University that you are aware and best teaching in area of computer science.
Also please suggest me with best school in Ottawa or Toronto area.
Thank you
Yours lovingly,
Neethu
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi Grace, How are you? I am fine. Hope your studie...
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Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e in touch with you by mail or chat, as i was held up with final exams. As you...
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Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... This year I would be in twelfth grade. I have analysed few schools and found la...
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Line 7, column 296, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... student to be aware of French language also. Schoolmates talk both in French and En...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...aching in area of computer science. Also please suggest me with best school in O...
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Line 11, column 24, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the best'.
Suggestion: with the best
...ter science. Also please suggest me with best school in Ottawa or Toronto area. Th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 820.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63276836158 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25260124991 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.638418079096 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.3262403319 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 54.6666666667 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.8 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.933333333333 4.34317383033 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176148774001 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610175770875 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540492188634 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790702039005 0.12726935374 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432916375539 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.