You have decided to do course abroad. Your friend lives in the same city where you plan to study.
Write to your friend explaining academic profile and expectations from course and University you have aimed for. Inquire all options of studying from her
In your letter,
Explain why you are not able to contact your friend earlier
Disclose your personal research from Canadian schools
Ask her for a suggestion
Dear Alan,
I hope this letter finds you well. Firstly, I would like to apologize for not contacting you earlier, as I was busy with my work schedule and therefore, didn't get any time to contact you. Moreover, I would like to inform you that, I had applied for Masters from British Columbia University and quite recently got an offer letter. I have few queries, which I would like to get answered from your end.
Let me explain you further. Major subject for which I have applied for is supply chain. However, there are some questions, regarding the credibility of institute, moreover, I would need few details regarding: what sort of clothes do I need carry, how much is the rent, if I opt for living outside hostel and what other expenses will be incurred by me. Furthermore, as you have studied supply chain, so if you may guide me regarding the difficulty level of this course and what other options do I have, other than British Columbia University.
Therefore, it is requested, if you may please help me clarify the above mentioned questions. So that, I can start my preparations for joining the course in Mid-September.
Your's Sincerely
John
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...ld like to get answered from your end. Let me explain you further. Major subjec...
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...ther than British Columbia University. Therefore, it is requested, if you may p...
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...se in Mid-September. Yours Sincerely John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.825 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68130099019 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.1308885491 44.8134815571 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7272727273 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.72727272727 4.34317383033 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287462863309 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108786551437 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499365201855 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170329296183 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498274544834 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.