You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country.
Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter
• describe a news story in your country
• explain why people are interested in it
• say how the story personally relates to you
Dear Usha,
Hope you doing well, I am aware you looking forward my letter about a local news item as you are doing journalism course you wrote me about, here is about the recent issue in Andhra Pradesh about Sabarimala Temple and the issue of women’s entry.
It is about the conflict between women rights and tradition. According to old-age traditions and customs women from 10 – 50 years of age were not permitted to enter this temple. However, the situation has changed when the constitutional bench of the supreme court, recently declared that restriction entry of women was unconstitutional. But the state government facing a hard time enforcing supreme court orders because of huge protest.
Additionally, the public concerned about the tradition followed since ages by devotees of Lord Ayyappa, as it's against the ethnicities. Moreover, Involvement of communists is least bothered then in the income of the temple because they can appoint people as governing members of the board with handsome perks.
As being women, I feel there shouldn’t be any gender inequality. As well as why womenfolks stay behind in performing their prayer, it's about respect, as womanhood they got was not by choice.
Greetings!!
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Usha, Hope you doing well, I am aware you look...
^^^
Line 8, column 137, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...stay behind in performing their prayer, its about respect, as womanhood they got wa...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, moreover, so, then, well, i feel, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1045.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27777777778 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8956135972 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.722222222222 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.733102386 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.111111111 76.5299724578 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 4.34317383033 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0887747855121 0.216113520407 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0261774705867 0.0766984524023 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407001329065 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0497249102804 0.12726935374 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515372950719 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 8.37731958763 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 8.71597938144 153% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.