You have a Facebook friend living in another country and s/he is curious to learn about a major news item in your country.
Write a letter to your Facebook friend. In your letter
describe a news story in your country
explain why people are interested in it
say how the story personally relates to you
Dear Catherian,
Hello! Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of the spirits. I am feeling hardhearted while inscribing this epistle to acquaint you with the prevailing untoward situations in my homeland. Sadly, the Well-known virus 'covid-19' has sustained ground in the news headlines as it is invading the prominent geographical terrains of the nation.
Since, it has been a month that dwellers are encountering the unpropitious effects of fatal virus which is accountable for high death toll across the whole country. As a result, authorities have implemented the complete lock-down across the nation to halt this communicable disease. Even though the literacy rate of ever burgeoning population of India is meager still some of the citizenry is rendering in-depth interest towards media news to avail current status of nation.
You will be surprised that by ill luck one of my closely associated relatives got infected as he traveled last month to china which is the indigenous place of this lethal virus. Beside all the fact, it is better to take precautions than cure. Hopefully, You and your family will opt some proactive measures for security from this epidemic.
Hope to hear from you soon and have a safe time ahead until this nuisance is curbed.
Your lovingly,
somu.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 284, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tion to halt this communicable disease. Even though the literacy rate of ever burgeoning po...
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Line 6, column 369, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ing population of India is meager still some of the citizenry is rendering in-depth interes...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, still, well, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1100.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18867924528 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75104756901 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683962264151 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9568877637 44.8134815571 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117247813098 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477071391159 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499990097202 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0530808269015 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156582437055 0.0580467560999 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 7.59969072165 132% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 41.2886597938 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.