You have a job in an international company. You have decided to leave this job.
Write a letter to your employer.
• Explain why you are leaving
• Tell him/her when you want to leave
• Say what you liked about the job
Dear Sir,
I am writing the letter to inform you that I am resign from my job here at PCL Trucking Ltd so that I can join my daughter busines in Alberta.
My daughter start the bakery busines in Calgary and she having problems to managing the store so I want to move with my wife to help her.
I don’t want to make any problem for you so I can be here till you find some other truck driver. I will stay to teach new person. I hope to moving by end October but no correct date I fix for moving.
This is very difficult decision for me as I work here for almost 20 years. Everybody here is like my family. I really enjoy my job here because you give too much support to all staff.
Thank you again for all support for 20 years and I wishing the company best of luck for future.
Yours sincerely
P. Baba
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing the letter to inform you th...
^^^
Line 2, column 49, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'resigned'.
Suggestion: resigned
...ting the letter to inform you that I am resign from my job here at PCL Trucking Ltd so...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...t the bakery busines in Calgary and she having problems to managing the store so I wan...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 130, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...river. I will stay to teach new person. I hope to moving by end October but no co...
^
Line 6, column 50, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
... again for all support for 20 years and I wishing the company best of luck for fu...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 654.0 937.175257732 70% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.06211180124 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.0424113207 2.54303337028 80% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658385093168 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0458083523 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.4 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203806421594 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733310243771 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644776132268 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108504757281 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031206312024 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.97 8.71597938144 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.49 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.