Many people try to look younger than they really are. For what reasons do you think people try to look younger than they are? Is it a good thing or a bad thing?
Nobody like to look like old lady or old man. People all the time want to look younger because it make them feel happy and get good job or partner. It is good to look younger than the correct age but if very much old man want to look like 20 year old boy then problem can happen. I think it is good to look maybe 5 year younger and nor more.
First of all, peoples want to look younger because all community think like this. When we go to party people want to look good and try not to look old. They wear new style clothes and use make up and lipstick because it can make them feel good in the party and other people are also looking. For example, my sister put make up and go the temple to meet other family and if girl looking good than get chance meet good boy for wedding. So it is good thing to look younger and not old.
However, hiding the age is also not good. It will not tell correct thing about the person. It is like cheat the people by hiding the real age. For example, when a 15 year boy meet the girl for first time and get feeling that the girl is younger because she hid with make up because she is 28 years, this is wrong. So always looking young is not good.
In total, it is okay to look good and look younger but must not cheat other peoples with this.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'makes'?
Suggestion: makes
...he time want to look younger because it make them feel happy and get good job or par...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, so, then, for example, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.9766536965 5.12529762239 78% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.6659059466 2.80592935109 59% => Word_Length_SD is low.
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.443579766537 0.561755894193 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.9 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.60771543086 75% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9403809658 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.1333333333 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370069541912 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148809867721 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825596331596 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251642835757 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761957553993 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 13.0946893788 45% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 50.2224549098 175% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 11.3001002004 46% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.51 12.4159519038 44% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.77 8.58950901804 67% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 78.4519038076 27% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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