You have just read an article in an inernational travel magazie which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.
Write a letter to the editor of magazie. IN your letter
- Correct the information in the article
- Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information
- Suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this letter finds you well. I wish to lodge a report about mistakes in Let’s Travel magazine which had written an itinerary about Tehran . the information that has been provided was wrong.
Let me explain you in detail. As the article illustrated a marvelous picture about a waterfall on north of Tehran, I must tell that this waterfall is not in Tehran, it’s in Gilan where is in north of Iran. Beside that, Tehran doesn’t include any nightclub which was mentioned in your article as a famous place for visitors.
furthermore, I would inquiry you to care more about what are you providing for an international magazine. As you share wrong information about a city, maybe tourists pay staggering cost to visit that town and when they don’t find any of sightseeing that were in a journal. they absolutely be disappointed.
furthermore, I was wondering your magazine write another article and directly apologize from the people whom are native in tehran and revise the wrong facts that were written in previous essay. Your assistance in this matter is really appreciated.
Faithfully,
Chi Chung
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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...ad written an itinerary about Tehran . the information that has been provided was ...
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...le as a famous place for visitors. furthermore, I would inquiry you to care more about...
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... of sightseeing that were in a journal. they absolutely be disappointed. furt...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, may, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19047619048 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85331609577 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645502645503 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3064077482 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.75 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236199785942 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741123382077 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0390136839573 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138170423016 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382959954221 0.0580467560999 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.