You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter:• Introduce yourself.• Explain that you did not bu

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You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter:
• Introduce yourself.
• Explain that you did not buy the items listed.
• Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem.

Dear Sir,
I am a decorous account holder of your bank- HDFC and the details are: Account Number- ABCD) Branch Name: Huda City Center, Gurgaon. I am writing this letter to inform you about some fishy transactions done through my account.
To elucidate, I have recently got my credit card bill summary for this month and I am sure that neither my wife nor me has done these transactions. All the items like jewellery worth Rs 200,000, designer clothes and other knick – knacks listed in the summary that I have not bought. Additionally, whenever I made any transaction, I do get a call from the bank whether this transaction should be allowed or not. However, this time I have not received any calls.
I would request the bank to look after into this matter as I am a salaried class person and cannot afford such a high-end shopping that too all in a single go. Also, please reverse all the transactions and in the mean time, I will file a complaint against the matter so that the culprit can be put behind bars.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Ben

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61855670103 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5161820844 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.69587628866 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3979338402 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176573179927 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681282215433 0.0766984524023 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518526885704 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110114081248 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058109523887 0.0580467560999 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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