You have just spent a week with a friend on a holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. [1.57 PM]Write a letter to your friend. In your letter-Thank you friend for the holiday.-Explain that you left your wallet in their hous

Essay topics:

You have just spent a week with a friend on a holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. [1.57 PM]
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- Thank you friend for the holiday.
- Explain that you left your wallet in their house.
- Give them instructions of how to send it back to you.

Hi Raj,

it was my pleasure to spend whole week with you and I have enjoyed a lot. I have enjoyed your company a lot and can't even realize that the time has passed just like a flash. I am surely going to carry these memories for my lifetime. I am also thankful to god that I got your company during these vacations as it has evaporated all of my stress and strain from life. I wish those days would have never ended. I am missing those moments a lot.

Well, I just realized that while leaving from your home, I have left my wallet somewhere. I was in a bit hurry as I was getting late for my flight. The wallet carries very less cash but I have my id cards,credit cards and my driving license without which it is getting bit difficult for me.

Luckily,my elder brother is coming to your hometown next week. I would request you to kindly hand over the wallet to him. As it carries important cards and id proofs, I would not recommend you to courier it. I will wait for one week more till the wallet delivered to me. I will give your address and contact details to my elder brother. I am sending a small gift carrying the collage of our pictures of the holiday along with my brother. I hope you will like that gift and will remember those moments for lifetime.

hope to meet you soon. I wish good health for you and your family.

YOUR FRIEND

Dheeraj

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
.... I have enjoyed your company a lot and cant even realize that the time has passed j...
^^^^
Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...o carry these memories for my lifetime. I am also thankful to god that I got your...
^
Line 3, column 367, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... all of my stress and strain from life. I wish those days would have never ended....
^
Line 3, column 409, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...wish those days would have never ended. I am missing those moments a lot. We...
^
Line 6, column 205, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , credit
...es very less cash but I have my id cards,credit cards and my driving license without wh...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , my
...tting bit difficult for me. Luckily,my elder brother is coming to your hometow...
^^^
Line 9, column 338, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nd contact details to my elder brother. I am sending a small gift carrying the co...
^
Line 9, column 439, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s of the holiday along with my brother. I hope you will like that gift and will r...
^
Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
...member those moments for lifetime. hope to meet you soon. I wish good health fo...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 32.9175257732 182% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 259.0 206.0 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30888030888 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21534160025 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532818532819 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 343.8 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.13402061856 197% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 12.6804123711 150% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2359720613 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.7368421053 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6315789474 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57894736842 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340748737838 0.216113520407 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110504903193 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826013551817 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211174352749 0.12726935374 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0766973129681 0.0580467560999 132% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.29 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.