You have just spent a week with a friend on a holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. [1.57 PM]
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- Thank you friend for the holiday.
- Explain that you left your wallet in their house.
- Give them instructions of how to send it back to you.
Dear Rahul,
I wanted to thank you for arranging the holiday especially for me. I had so much fun and it was a much-needed break for me after the hectic schedule at work.
I also wanted to ask you a favor. It so happened that while I was at your place, I forgot my wallet after I paid to the food delivery guy. I had kept it on the center table in your living area and that is the last memory of the wallet I have. Could you please check if the wallet is still there and would you be able to return it to me?
Since all my cards and cash was in the wallet, I am actually using PayTM and other e-wallets for shopping purposes or buying food. I have also borrowed some emergency cash from one of my colleagues and this situation makes me feel so helpless. I would really appreciate if you could speed post my wallet, so I can make use of my cards. My work address is:
ABC Corporation Pvt. Ltd.,
Street 372, Near Elements Mall,
Bangalore, India – 560043
Again, appreciate your help.
Yours Lovingly,
Thomas
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I was at your place, I forgot my wallet after I paid to the food delivery guy. I...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... address is: ABC Corporation Pvt. Ltd., Street 372, Near Elements Mall, Bangal...
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Line 6, column 32, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Ltd., Street 372, Near Elements Mall, Bangalore, India – 560043 Again, apprec...
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Line 9, column 26, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...te your help. Yours Lovingly, Thomas
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, really, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 852.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41450777202 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28750462017 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642487046632 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.3565616191 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272505569624 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104710587487 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732387337007 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104775963646 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101794066679 0.0580467560999 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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