You have just spent a week with a friend on a holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. [1.57 PM]
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- Thank you friend for the holiday.
- Explain that you left your wallet in their house.
- Give them instructions of how to send it back to you.
Dear Rahul,
I wanted to thank you for arranging the holiday especially for me. I had so much fun and it was a much-needed break for me after the hectic schedule at work.
I also wanted to ask you a favor. It so happened that while I was at your place, I forgot my wallet after I paid to the food delivery guy. I had kept it on the center table in your living area and that is the last memory of the wallet I have. Could you please check if the wallet is still there and would you be able to return it to me?
As you would know, it becomes impossible to survive without your wallet. I would really appreciate if you could speed post that to me. My work address is:
ABC Corporation Pvt. Ltd.,
Street 372, Near Elements Mall,
Bangalore, India – 560043
Appreciate your help.
Yours Lovingly,
Thomas
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I was at your place, I forgot my wallet after I paid to the food delivery guy. I...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... address is: ABC Corporation Pvt. Ltd., Street 372, Near Elements Mall, Bangal...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Ltd., Street 372, Near Elements Mall, Bangalore, India – 560043 Appreciate yo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...te your help. Yours Lovingly, Thomas
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 684.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 153.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47058823529 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26005851618 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640522875817 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7839081087 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.1818181818 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9090909091 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.353112903158 0.216113520407 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132844381882 0.0766984524023 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080993714605 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12548548868 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110136001403 0.0580467560999 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 8.37731958763 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.76 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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