The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty
years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile
delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Today, women are considered as strong and capable as men – be it in entertainment industry, software industries or sports. The question is, are the teenagers impacted negatively due to their working mothers?
Off late, the state of women has improved largely and rapidly due to number of reasons. Firstly, unlike old times, both the son and the daughter are treated equally in a family. This has led to provision of proper and complete education to both the genders as well as equal number of job opportunities. Secondly, today, there is a sense of independence in women since they are earning and do not have to depend on the fathers or the husbands for money or survival. Lastly, even though most married women are working professionals, they are able to manage and afford their children’s education, upbringing, house expenses, and the like, very diligently and responsibly.
Although, this multi-tasking specie tackles everything so efficiently, there may be times when her children, especially teenagers, go out-of-hand and indulge themselves in bad influences and habits – for example drugs, alcohol, stealing, rape, and the like. Most often than not, the mothers are pointed fingers at and blamed for such wrong doings by the society and one often forgets that the responsibility of a child is not just mother’s but father’s too. In addition, the fact that the children may have gotten into such illegal activities through school environment or neighborhood, is completely ignored.
To conclude, claiming that a woman should not be working but should rather take care of her children is a wrong expectation. I believe, both the parents are responsible for the child and his or her well-being, irrespective of whether they are working or stay-at-home parents. It may easily be worked out if both the mother and the father decide mutually and spend equal time and energy in bringing - up their child.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 258, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... complete education to both the genders as well as equal number of job opportunities. Seco...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1618.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16932907348 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00180480419 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619808306709 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3172185758 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.461538462 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0769230769 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147441165825 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0490703716133 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288955243153 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861739724525 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0124729839894 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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