Some people prefer to work for a large company.
Others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer?
Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
The issue whether working for a large company is better than working for a small
company is a controversial one. From my everyday experience and observation I think
that every option has its advantages and disadvantages. I base my opinion on the
following points.
From the one side working for a large company brings many benefits. First of all, one has
better medical insurance, higher salary. Often employees of a large company have less
responsibility. Moreover, they feel more secure because their company has more clients
and this means better chance to survive on the modern market. However, one working for
a large company has less chance to be promoted because one's manager does not want
to lose his or her job unless she or he is promoted too. Also, from my observation,
managers of a large company do not pay much attention to one's solutions and
suggestions.
From the other side working for a small company has many advantages too. Firstly, one
has better chance to be promoted. Secondly, one can talk to the owner of the company
about any improvements that can be done in order to get more profit. Another important
aspect of working for a small company is the opportunities to find out more about how
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92890995261 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72127897663 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545023696682 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8261746897 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2307692308 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.38176352705 320% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143608218087 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0626220649357 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769531262425 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0634622809163 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0829206701777 0.056905535591 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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