You have recently employed a plumber to do a job at a place you were renovating; however, something went wrong with the work and it created a problem for your project. Write a letter to the plumber and say:
• What the problem is
• How it can be fixed?
• Suggest how to approach the job in future.
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to complain about the work you did recently at my under construction house in Urban Estate, Ambala city.
Let me explain the problem in detail. I would like to remind you that three days ago I hired you for making a water connection to my house from the main line of the water supply to the locality. Also, I requested you to lay down the water pipes for the water supply to different parts of the house. This would have helped the construction and the plastering of the walls at different parts of the house. However, the water supply got interrupted the day after you made the connection and this problem hampered the construction work. The labourers are now bringing the water from a tube well nearby and this is costing me time and money.
Can you please visit my site to rectify the problem? I think the connection between the mainline and the pipeline to my house needs to be revisited. You will either have to dig up the road again to repair it or make a new connection. I hope you would be little more careful in the future while making a new connection and recheck it the next day to ensure the quality of the work.
Yours sincerely,
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, while, i think, mind you
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 968.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46082949309 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41870959137 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543778801843 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6759989549 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7272727273 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81818181818 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189731829354 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0747518429465 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400739759527 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130542322706 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107380500577 0.0580467560999 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.