You have recently flown to another country on a business trip. You were satisfied with the flight, but didn’t like services at the airport. Write a letter to the airport manager.
In the letter, you should:
• Tell him/her your flight details
• Why you disappointed
• Suggest some improvements to the airport services.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my frustration about my recent experience at the airport and hope that I may not encounter these problems in the future again.
My name is Salman Khan, and I traveled from Islamabad to Dubai through Thai Airways on February 27, 2019 at 7 PM. Flight number was TA 52K and my boarding pass number was UYTR67L.
The disappointment was related to the airport service. As I reached the airport at 5 PM, which was 2 hours early than the actual flight time, there was a long queue for security clearance at the main entrance. All passengers were humiliated there, just because there was only single walk-through-gate for checking. International airports usually have several gates for checking purpose. Although there were also a few more of them there, they were out of service; therefore, the travelers had to wait for almost 2 hours there. In addition, no one was present at the baggage wrapping area, and I had to take my luggage intact, without wrapping it.
In order to rectify the above problems, I would like to give some suggestions. Please be sure to do regular preventive maintenance of all walk-through-gates; this could be performed at night when there are usually few passengers travelling. Increase the number of gates also, so that the travelers would wait less in the queue. Furthermore, employ more than one person at the wrapping shop, this would not only make the process more efficient, but also avoid any inconvenience to the passengers due to the absence of an employee.
I hope that the highlighted issues would be resolved shortly.
Yours faithfully,
Salman Khan
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.48453608247 200% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 937.175257732 147% => OK
No of words: 276.0 206.0 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97826086957 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90290433914 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 127.690721649 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623188405797 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 290.88556701 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.2987922554 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.6 76.5299724578 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.93333333333 4.34317383033 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107691009153 0.216113520407 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0366433348334 0.0766984524023 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324097649796 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0536825335495 0.12726935374 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433227226749 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.