You have recently flown to another country on a business trip. You were satisfied with the flight, but didn’t like services at the airport. Write a letter to the airport manager and say
– Give your flight details.
– Why were you disappointed?
– Suggest some improvements to the airport services.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am a frequent traveller of Jet airways and platinum member of Jet privilege . I prefer this airline as it is always on time and for the courteous service offered by the staff. However, I would like to express my dissatisfaction which I faced during my recent trip.
Recently, I booked 9W 6 flight for my business trip. It was the cheapest flight and was reaching the destination within the stipulated time.
Let me explain in more detail. After security check, I went to check in counter to show my soft copy of boarding pass and to collect hard copy. In todays world , most of the documents I carry is in the form of soft copies. But staff insisted me to bring hard copy of the same and airline ticket and noted me that without it, they wont allow me to pass the check in counter.
Somehow, I managed to get printout of both the documents, but in meantime the queue of that counter was doubled and my another 15-20 minutes was wasted in that queue. I would like to suggest you a viable solution. It would be great if management briefs the team about rules and regulations and allow digital copies of the documents as well.
Thankyou for your attention to this matter.
Best regards,
Tim Frank
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ays and platinum member of Jet privilege . I prefer this airline as it is always o...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...nd to collect hard copy. In todays world , most of the documents I carry is in the...
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Line 4, column 351, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t without it, they wont allow me to pass the check in counter. Somehow, I manage...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1002.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51351351351 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47292417071 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1249962151 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5714285714 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.85714285714 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0997164528236 0.216113520407 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0348600270452 0.0766984524023 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044727674832 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0564553817976 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388431814041 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.