You have some repairs to do at home, but there is a restaurant next to your house. Write a letter to the restaurant manager and say:
- What repairs are you going to do?
- How will it affect the restaurant?
- Provide a solution for the inconvenience.
Dear Sir,
I am living in a house next to your restaurant, therefore, would like to inform you of critical repair and reconstruction works in advance. Let me explain in detail.
To elucidate I have recently moved into this house. Since the house was unoccupied for many years thus it needs a repair on outer walls as the walls are ruptured. Additionally, I need to install smoke alarms which is a mandate from the government to detect fire. Although we will our best try not to disturb your daily operations however heavy noise may be generated from these repair works which may cause some inconvenience to your customers. Lastly, the front gate of your restaurant will be blocked by the materials required for the reconstruction and repair works.
Therefore, to mitigate these effects I recommend you advise your customers to use the back gate of your restaurant. Additionally, in case of any minor damage during the repair work, I shall bear the cost.
I look forward to your kind understanding and cooperation.
Yours faithfully
Saad
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, lastly, look, may, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01142857143 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90039265463 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674285714286 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0927134908 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7272727273 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224090625079 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708510894965 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563503017614 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10993939573 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534920997196 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.