You live in a room in college which you share with another student. There are many problems with this arrangement and you find it difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter:
• describe the situation
• explain the problems and why is it difficult to work
• say how you would like the situation resolved
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you to draw your attention to the difficulties that I am going through with my current roommate.
Firstly, my roommate is a drummer in our college band. He often brings his friends to the room to practice performance. It used to be once in a while, but this has become regular now. Secondly, he’s a night person and keeps the lights on until very late.
All of these have created many difficulties in my study. The regular band rehearsals are very noisy and I can’t even concentrate on my studies for the upcoming exams. Moreover, him working until late at night has often disturbed my sleep that has caused headaches the next day. My grades are suffering now and I’m afraid I might fail this semester if this goes on.
I would like to request you to kindly change our rooms so I can focus on my studies. If you don’t have any vacant rooms, I would like to get my money refunded so that I can find accommodation off-campus. I have tried to convince my roommate many times but his refusal to cooperate has forced me to reach out to you.
I look forward to the resolution regarding this matter.
Yours faithfully,
ABC
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 958.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51886792453 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56088202921 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650943396226 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.4975743432 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.4285714286 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1428571429 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21428571429 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164843340747 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0492334979231 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393228719533 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847161661769 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455305862104 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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