You live in a room in college which you share with another student.
However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it
very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter
describe the situation
explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to </span>inform<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> you about the inconvenience faced by me at my accommodation, caused by my roommate.
Let me begin by explaining you the situation in detail. There are unavoidable music and disturbing noise created by him. Moreover, the odd hour room lighting is also adding to the inconvenience caused.
My</span> roommate<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> keeps playing multiplayer games throughout the night and as a result of that, he is continuously chatting to his gaming friends. Additionally, he keeps the tube-light on for computer gaming almost till early morning. Not only this is disturbing my sleep pattern but also unfavorably affecting my health, </span>consequently<span style="font-size: 19.36px;">, I am scoring lower grades at college.
It would </span>be so great<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> of you if you either change my room and pair me with a like-minded person who can empathize with my situation, or you can substitute my bedfellow with someone who is more laborious and thoughtful.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
</span>Abhishek<span style="font-size: 19.36px;"> </span>Saxena<br>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, moreover, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1155.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.45251396648 4.54256449028 142% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.09864001068 2.54303337028 200% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.687150837989 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.5172592492 44.8134815571 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 76.5299724578 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118338992945 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573595022843 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604349902215 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0733314623605 0.12726935374 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0654524771411 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 8.37731958763 214% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 70.7449484536 65% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 19.83 8.71597938144 228% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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