You live in a room in college which you share with another student.
However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it
very difficult to work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter
describe the situation
explain your problems and why it is difficult to work
say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to express my discomfort about my accommodation at the college.
My name is David Watson and have enrolled for Master course in New York University. I moved into the college apartment last month. Everything was fine until the new roommate arrived. He has a habit of playing loud music all the time which distracts me completely.
The type of my course requires frequent submission of assignments which involves a deep research for any given topic. While working for such assignments, focus and concentration is mandatory. How would I able to maintain the requisite level of concentration in such a noisy place? Evaluation of such assignments are the basis of my results. Despite of multiple requests, my roommate plays immensely loud music.
For me to finish off my assignments on time, I would require a quieter place. I will prefer sharing room with someone pursing similar course so that he will know the importance of maintaining etiquette. Hence, i would request you to switch my apartment at the earliest.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
XYZ
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 82, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'deep research'.
Suggestion: deep research
...ubmission of assignments which involves a deep research for any given topic. While working for ...
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Line 9, column 119, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'purses'.
Suggestion: purses
...I will prefer sharing room with someone pursing similar course so that he will know the...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 211, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rtance of maintaining etiquette. Hence, i would request you to switch my apartmen...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, look, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07486631016 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9042012225 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68449197861 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1862062403 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.2666666667 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4666666667 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.06666666667 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129395470752 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0405538926007 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458668389536 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827920706923 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481201607038 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.