You missed a flight due to a problem at the airport Write a letter to the airline In your letter Describe what happened that caused you to miss the flight Explain how missing your flight affected you Make it clear what you would like the airline to do

Essay topics:

You missed a flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter
Describe what happened that caused you to miss the flight
Explain how missing your flight affected you
Make it clear what you would like the airline to do

Dear sir or Madam,

I am writing to complain about missing my flight last week due to a mistake by one of your employees.
I was supposed to catch a flight to Kish Island, where I intended to spend four days on a seminar. Unfortunately, your employee at check-in-desk gave me a wrong boarding card. That was too late when I noticed the issue, so I missed the accurate flight and I could not be there at the right time.

As a result of the error, I had to change all of my plans as well as my lecture postponed to another day. This caused me great inconvenience because I had to book a new flight the day after which meant that I missed the first day of seminar and I spent an extra $100.

As the mistake caused by your company, I hope that you will compensate me for the cost of the additional flight.
I look forward to receiving your response.

Yours faithfully,
Azin Rad

Votes
Average: 8.9 (10 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, so, well, as to, as a result, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 723.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32934131737 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59114742228 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640718562874 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9358446679 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3333333333 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26056511679 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0967525462118 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603217165134 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13739132397 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596858576374 0.0580467560999 103% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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