Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
It is sometimes argued that a number of options are available for people. While making a decision might be tough due to this vision, I believe that having a variety of choices could be more productive than fewer ones.
On the one hand, people with several choices in life may be at risk of getting confused and would not be able to mitigate their issues. Consequently, if they cannot overcome this clutter, the future consequences such as mental problems will appear and add other difficulties. For example, students who are not certain about selecting an appropriate major for themselves, in relation to their capabilities and competencies, might be at risk of some mental disorders such as anxiety, obsession or even depression that lead them to medical treatment. As a result, individuals should be careful not to be drawn in the pool of options and jeopardize their well-beings.
On the other hand, although being overloaded with many choices might be challenging, it has great advantages. In the first place, I believe people mainly tend to estimate every possibility in their life in which not to overlook any opportunities. What’s more, by having information about various possibilities, people’s awareness could be arisen in every aspect of life, resulting in making the premium decision to be more satisfied in the future. For instance, when it comes to an employment opportunity, most people will be more likely to pick out their favorite job by comparing and assessing diverse offers. Therefore, owning one or two choices might be less beneficial to people’s consent than having a wide variety of ones.
In conclusion, it seems to me that by means of various choices, our decision-making will be more satisfying, however, exposing to too many choices can be harmful for our health.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16610169492 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03585771402 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589830508475 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.451084136 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.5 7.06120827912 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114526164553 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457435777622 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275795400836 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0747887913154 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216300494212 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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