Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you about the long waiting time to enter the shopping mall in my neighborhood. I am a resident of Changi Simei Zone 3, and have been residing there for past 15 years. Recently, I have noticed that there has been long waiting hours daily during lunch time between 12pm to 2pm to enter the mall.
Firstly, this mall is visited by all age groups especially the older generation for food and shopping. This is the only one mall located in the vicinity. When I see people standing outside for an hour just to get themselves screened and checked especially during these peak hours, I feel empathetic towards them. As these days, the weather is hot and humid, it gets really warm outside and might cause dehydration to some vulnerable groups like pregnant women, old-aged people or disabled.
Secondly, the toilets that are located on various floors are mostly occupied. The reason for this is that, the toilets on some floors are closed for cleaning. Although they have a proper schedule for their cleaning staff, apparently there are times when toilets on two or more floors are closed simultaneously.
Lastly, since no one has raised their concerns so far, I would like to take this opportunity to notify the relevant authorities to look into this matter. I suggest, the management office can get another security personnel to support the entrance during peak hours to assist these vulnerable groups and kill the queue faster. Moreover, the cleaning staff of the toilet could be a little more considerate and flexible on their respective floors, so that they do not provide any inconvenience to the disabled.
Looking forward for your prompt response.
Yours faithfully,
Nur Amirah
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 937.175257732 155% => OK
No of words: 291.0 206.0 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99312714777 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56416344344 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 127.690721649 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621993127148 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 290.88556701 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 6.0 0.824742268041 728% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4168662166 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8666666667 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 4.34317383033 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112857260107 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403349571281 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0526968052073 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.061757926094 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400207993225 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 41.2886597938 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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