you ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the m

Essay topics:

you ordered a new cheque book from your bank two weeks ago but you have received nothing.
Write a letter to the manager complaining about the bad service. Say when and how you ordered the cheque book. Ask how much longer you will have to wait and ask the manager what action he will take over this matter.

Dear Sir or Madam,
I ordered a cheque-book for my saving account that I maintain with your bank. It has been two weeks now, but I still do not receive yet. Through this letter, I complain about that service bad service, I am hoping you will rectify this as soon as possible.
Firstly, I placed an order for cheque-book on 14th July. Secondly, I submitted the request form along with the amount which is required for obtaining this. Further, I deposit request forms on the counter no- 1. I must say that the service provided by your bank was very good, but not at this time.
Not only, I have been a customer of your bank for 10 years, but also, I had applied for my cheque book so many times. Moreover, It took only 4-5 working days to reach at my home address, but now I have not received it yet. Could you tell me how much time more your branch takes to send me this on my home address? Further, I also hope that you take strict against the employee who is responsible for the delay.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Amanpreet Kauri.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41206030151 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29934505943 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678391959799 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2711564905 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.5384615385 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 4.34317383033 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305863562048 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938109644257 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599563228048 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185164813716 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074963545547 0.0580467560999 129% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.71 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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