Overpopulation in many major urban centres around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?
Developed cities, nowadays, are attracting more and more people to live there. This is causing overpopulation in urban areas and over the world. This essay will not only discuss the major reasons behind this trend but also the remedies to curb this problem.
To begin with, firstly, the major reason for overpopulation in urban areas is that these areas provide multifarious facilities such as hospitals, entertainment sources and also are the hub of elite education. Owing to this, people like to live in urban areas as compared to the countryside. Secondly, educated people are being benefited from private companies. These multinational companies not only offer them dream jobs to them according to their qualification, but also provides them with a handsome salary along with benefits of cheap accommodation. Consequently, people are like to switch from rural areas to developed cities to secure their future as well as their children's. For instance, According to a survey conducted by Cambridge University, 65% of people think that if they would bring up their children in big cities, then they will get more opportunities to build their future as compared to less developed areas. Therefore, the population rate in urban areas is increasing day by day.
Although the government cannot force people to live in the countryside, some solutions can be provided to curb the problem of overpopulation in urban areas. First, the authorities should encourage private companies to establish their business in rural areas to provide employment to local people. Secondly, official authorities along with improving their education system in undeveloped areas, they should offer subsidies on agricultural activities to promote the interest of people in this field. For example, the government of Canada currently distributes much free agricultural equipment to help farmers. Moreover, they have opened various international schools to serve quality education to rural children. Consequently, people would like to live in their own rural areas. By doing so, the population of urban areas will be reduced.
In conclusion, although, people migrate from undeveloped areas to developed areas to fulfil their dreams and to secure their future, still this worrying issue can be tackled by the government by applying various measures such as motivate private companies to establish their companies in rural areas and also by opening new educational institutes to provide similar education as urban areas.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, then, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2115.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4792746114 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95179146184 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497409326425 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 678.6 506.74238477 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.7857005903 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4444444444 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5555555556 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175859354466 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709980483233 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977485389855 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148597968403 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114309370974 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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