You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.Say where you think you left the papers.Explain why they are so importantTell the manager what you want to do

Essay topics:

You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Say where you think you left the papers.
Explain why they are so important
Tell the manager what you want to do

Dear Sir,

I am writing to enquire about the documents which I forgot at your hotel during the meeting on last Saturday. I would like to know if you have found them.

To start with, I had a meeting with some foreign deligates in your property in the morning hours as mentioned above. We had booked for business lounge located on first floor, room number 1. The meeting concluded just before lunch and I think I kept my paper folder on table in the room itself as I planned to collect it after having meal. But, when I reached home I could not find them. So, I need your help in this regard.

this documents are contains confidential information about our companies future investment plans. Furthermore, I am primarily responsible for their safe custody. In case, if the data is leaked my job will be at risk.

Lastly, I request you to please trace the docket containing these papers I have mentioned above. Once you find them please keep it with you and let me know on my private number. I will personally collect it from you.

I am looking forward for your kind cooperation and eagarly waiting for your response.

Yours faithfully,
XYZ ABC

Votes
Average: 8.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir, I am writing to enquire about the docume...
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...for your response. Yours faithfully, XYZ ABC
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, lastly, look, so, i think, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 956.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66341463415 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50363210279 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663414634146 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5416978287 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.7333333333 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235163722594 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739149830625 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084095139946 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122264853256 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118756489976 0.0580467560999 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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