Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In this day and time, life is full of emotions and surprises. some people assert that adolescent age is the best part of life, whereas many others argue that grown ups life is more colourful compared to any other phases of life. Personally, I am in favour of latter view. As adult life gives us indepence to handle the greater responsibilities of life.
Convincing arguments can be made that adulthood is most vibrant phase of an individual's life. To start with, when people attain adulthood they are done with their education and they know what they want to pursue in their life. In other words they are focused and settled in their independent life. Secondly, during this span of life individuals starts earning. So they are financially independent to do activities as per their will, in this way they can spend on their hobbies which makes them happy. For example, buying the new car for long drives. Finally, it is the time when they are settled in their life to take care of any responsibility, it can be financially or physically demanding and they are mature enough to take care of it. Hence, I believe adult life is less stressful and enjoyable.
Admittedly, teenagers has nothing to worry about apart from their educational grades and to choose the field they want to work with. As a result, they have a lot of free time to enjoy life to the fullest. However, during adolescent age individuals are not matured enough to take the right decision and choose wisely and in most of the cases they end up wasting most of their time. Furthermore, they are not financially capable of taking care of their needs and demands. Consequently, the benefits of being teenager are quite limited.
To conclude, I concede that there are some reasons to be happy during teenager phase of life. Despite that, being a financially independent and responsible adult brings more happiness to individual's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, apart from, for example, as a result, in other words, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8527607362 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68798484445 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533742331288 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.3714868615 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2631578947 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1578947368 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.10526315789 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167696667544 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612467470106 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483777688127 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127741183615 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657087671965 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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