You recently had an issue with water leaking at your rental property Write a letter to your landlord to complain about the problem and say When did it happen Describe the problem Suggest what could be done about it

Essay topics:

You recently had an issue with water leaking at your rental property. Write a letter to your landlord to complain about the problem and say

– When did it happen?
– Describe the problem.
– Suggest what could be done about it.

Dear Mr. John,

I am writing to bring to your attention a leakage problem with my kitchen tap at flat number 20 in your owned building on North Road.

My annual leave was due, therefore I traveled out of the city for almost one month. When I returned home last week, I have noticed a heavy drops of water from my kitchen tap. I ensured to close the main water service valve before my travelling, but the leakage has occurred.

Two main taps are available in the kitchen, and the only one which is for the washing machine was leaking. I could only assume that its assembly with the machine`s hose became extremely loose; however it was recently fixed. Either its make is size is incorrect or its model is wrong to sustain the high pressure.

I have comprehensive contract with your company, and my contract states that all damaged items are covered.Therefore, I would ask that you report the problem to your company plumber, and that you request them to come and replace it at soon as possible.

I look forward to the problem being resolved.

Yours sincerely,

Ayoub

Votes
Average: 8.3 (4 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 108, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...ates that all damaged items are covered.Therefore, I would ask that you report the proble...
^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, so, therefore

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74736842105 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61131142693 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668421052632 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.1658685392 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217350599279 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779721541687 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601096811788 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117589066848 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549310787632 0.0580467560999 95% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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