You recently started commuting to work by bicycle and discovered that there is a problem with bicycle parking near the building where you work.
Write a letter to the building manager and say
1– Explain the reason for using a bicycle to commute.
2– What problems have you encountered with parking?
3– What are your recommendations to solve them?
Dear Mr. John,
I am writing to report some problems in the parking lot where I park my bicycle closest to our work place.
You know that our company location is in the center of the city, and this area is usually crowded in day time due to a lot of commuters. I was driving to work daily by my car, but I realized that bicycle is the best option to commute instead. Therefore, I bought a brand-new bicycle last week for commuting to avoid checking in late at work.
A parking lot is available just outside our building, and the ticket of bicycle is very cheap comparable to the car parking fee. Many available lockers for bicycles; however, I noticed that some do not properly work and are damaged. Locker`s keys are sometimes getting stuck in the machine, and I could not open it.
Our company has a reserved packing area beside the building, and it is always empty from the cars. I would therefore request that you discuss this matter with our administration department, and that you advise them to allow me park in this designated parking.
I look forward to receiving the administration approval.
Yours sincerely,
Ayoub
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, look, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.775 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67476634494 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.463917525773 1293% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6646455492 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8181818182 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90909090909 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262157833809 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824981279554 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783607909591 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133314980068 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912084856535 0.0580467560999 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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