You recently started commuting to work by bicycle and discovered that there is a problem with bicycle parking near the building where you work. Write a letter to the building manager and say
– Explain the reason for using a bicycle to commute.
– What problems have you encountered with parking?
– What are your recommendations to solve them?
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to bring it to your attention regarding issue an parking lot and I am facing some issues, while park my vehicle.
Nowadays, I am commuting from bicycle to reduce the environment hazards from my side and also I am very much interested to take care of my health conscious and one more reason is that we do not have a much space in our parking area. Now I am quite surprised, although I am unable to park my bicycle in order to space issue. Four wheeler vehicles are not able to take reverse because my cycle stand in the last corner so always they kept my vehicle outside because my vehicle easy to lift it right.
I therefore request you to please arrange some more space for a parking lot area so that we can get comfortable to park it. Actually, We can reduce our smoking lot area and that space which we can utilise it for park our vehicle.
I am looking forward your response soon.
Yours sincerely,
Benet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 72, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ng it to your attention regarding issue an parking lot and I am facing some issues...
^^
Line 4, column 200, Rule ID: A_MUCH_NN1[1]
Message: Maybe you should omit the article "a", leaving only 'much'.
Suggestion: much
... one more reason is that we do not have a much space in our parking area. Now I am qui...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 258, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... parking area. Now I am quite surprised, although I am unable to park my bicycle ...
^^
Line 4, column 492, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'rights'?
Suggestion: rights
...side because my vehicle easy to lift it right. I therefore request you to please a...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45197740113 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34615021347 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598870056497 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.1126937509 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.125 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 4.34317383033 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106628971355 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463896281162 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400353267622 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.055527218786 0.12726935374 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321433745194 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.