You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very god.
You want to tell him how you feel.
Write a letter to the singer. In your letter
say how you feel about his performance
give details of your musical activities
explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities.
Dear Mr. Jackson,
I went to the concert performed by your groups last month in Chicago. Albeit it is not the first time I watch you singing, still I was amazed by your performance and couldn't stop thinking of the show.
With strong interest in music, I attend the musical school and intend to pursue my passion in singing. Having kept practicing in the past few years, I personally witness my progress in singing and attain more professional techniques. However, I find it difficult for me to figure out my personal style of singing. Most of the time I am simply imitating and repeating.
I know that you are used to keep blogs and share your happiness and sorrow related to singing. I was encouraged by your story and felt connected. If possible, could you write something about how you find your own style of singing? I believe many students like me would be delighted to learn from your experience.
I look forward to your response.
Sincerely,
Alan
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ll I was amazed by your performance and couldnt stop thinking of the show. With s...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 21, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to keeping'.
Suggestion: used to keeping
...nd repeating. I know that you are used to keep blogs and share your happiness and sorr...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8630952381 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63479438285 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672619047619 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3677946862 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2727272727 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2727272727 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257236252562 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807629264556 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944442863894 0.0603063233224 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143191924488 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114197670669 0.0580467560999 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.