You recently went to a public event for example an exhibition festival or show that you think your friend would enjoy Write a letter to friend In your letter tell your friend what the event was explain why you think your friend would like the event invite | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend. In your letter

• tell your friend what the event was
• explain why you think your friend would like the event
• invite them to come to the event with you

Dear Rose,
Hope you are doing well. I have attended this jewellery exhibition in Downtown lately and thought to touch base about my fabulous experience with you.
If I’m not wrong, you are well-acquainted with my insane love for jewellery especially the rings and the chains. So when I heard that a renowned brand Ornas is presenting their summer collection in Hotel JW Marriot, Downtown, I was head over heels to attend it as soon as possible.
The exhibition is planned for three days and yesterday when I went there, women flocked in herds in order to have a glimpse of their new collection. I must admit that the floral range of pendant sets mesmerized me and I was spellbound at that time. Instantly, at that moment, I had your thought as you love this kind of pieces and I was certain that if I would tell you about the same, you will not have any second thoughts about the visit.
Therefore, I would like to invite you to accompany me on this event tomorrow as it’s there last day. Most importantly, the brand is going to reveal discount offers for their customers and I certainly do not aspire to leave this golden chance from my hand and hope you too would be pondering over the same.
Awaiting for your prompt revert.
Yours lovingly,
Misha Lucas

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IELTS Writing Task I - IELTS General Training

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 68, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...invite you to accompany me on this event tomorrow as it’s there last day. Most im...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: Awaiting; Waiting for
... too would be pondering over the same. Awaiting for your prompt revert. Yours lovingly, M...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, therefore, well, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64601769912 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50287640932 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628318584071 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.366907887 44.8134815571 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4545454545 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5454545455 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236962582313 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092246501584 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0630879581186 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123563552209 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044539500138 0.0580467560999 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Essay evaluations by e-grader

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, therefore, well, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments