You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.
In the letter:
explain why you were at the restaurant
describe the problems
write about the action you want the manager to take
Dear Sir or Madam,
I recently visited your restaurant for a dinner with my wife on 27th October. I am writing this letter to complain about the meal that was served to us and would also like to suggest steps you can take to avoid such situations in future.
As it was my wife’s birthday, it was a special night for us and I had planned a candle light dinner with her. Therefore I ensured to make a reservation well in advance at your restaurant and was also particular about the dishes that should be served considering her likings.
In the beginning, the Cheese Tikka starter that we ordered tasted really awful. The cheese in the dish seemed stale and we had to chew a lot to swallow it. Even in a dish as common as lentils, the quantity of salt was very high making it taste bad. Even post replacement, the issue was not resolved. I believe the issue is the food is cooked beforehand and then just heated to be served once the order is placed.
I would provide two suggestions which I believe may help to eliminate such issues. Firstly, I suggest you to have a discussion with your cook that he or she needs to taste the dish before sending it out to the table. Secondly, you should just prepare the gravy beforehand, but the actual dish later on basis the orders that are received. This will help to keep the material fresh and also to provide a better customized dish in case any replacement is required.
I hope that you will take my complaint and suggestions positively by implementing my suggestions so as to improve the rating of your restaurant.
Look forward to visit your restaurant next month and see the changes myself!
Yours sincerely,
Atul Sharma
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...s you can take to avoid such situations in future. As it was my wife's birthday, it...
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Line 4, column 115, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...planned a candle light dinner with her. Therefore I ensured to make a reservation well in...
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Line 10, column 98, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...sitively by implementing my suggestions so as to improve the rating of your restaurant. ...
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Line 12, column 14, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to visiting'.
Suggestion: to visiting
...ng of your restaurant. Look forward to visit your restaurant next month and see the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 937.175257732 148% => OK
No of words: 302.0 206.0 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6059602649 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57051979886 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 127.690721649 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576158940397 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.0 290.88556701 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.8818537152 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7333333333 76.5299724578 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146078682906 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429344229392 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543611483565 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771320827735 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614642427133 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 41.2886597938 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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