Write about the following topic.
Recently, abortion increases rapidly and becomes a controversial topic. Some people suppose that abortion should be legal while others are against it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Bringing a life into this world is one of the most splendid experiences for a mother. But the number of abortion cases have increased significantly and is a controversial topic with people having strong opinions. This essay will discuss why abortion should be made legal with strong controls in place even though there are points contrary to it.
Certainly, there are some issues associated with undergoing an abortion. Foremost is that the society consider it a taboo and in India conforming to the societal norms is of utmost importance. Secondly, it has a negative effect on the woman’s health when she undergoes the operation. It can also prove life threatening for her. For instance, last year’s medical data pertaining to the abortions conducted after 20 weeks of pregnancy show that 20% of them resulted in death of the mother and 50% reported permanent infertility.
However, it should not be forgotten that there could be some practical reasons why so many abortions are taking place in recent times. Firstly, as the number of young people involved in sexual intercourse has gone up, the teenage pregnancies are on a rise. In such scenarios, a girl is mentally and physically not prepared to deliver a baby. Additionally, the participation of women in corporate world has risen tremendously. In case she is not mentally ready because of her priorities towards career, he decision to do the drop the pregnancy should be respected. In my family, the average age of delivering first child was around 22 in my mother’s generation, which has increased to 28 in mine. Therefore, it is important to accept the changing realities and the legal system should be designed in a way so that it supports such scenarios. Women should therefore be allowed to abort as long as their life is not compromised.
In the conclusion, although there are various adverse impacts on the mother’s health and negativity in society, this is a current phenomenon which needs to be accepted. The legal framework should be designed in a way to support it. Therefore, I am of the opinion that abortion should be allowed legally with certain guardrails to ensure safety of the mother.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 506, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'decisions'.
Suggestion: decisions
...se of her priorities towards career, he decision to do the drop the pregnancy should be ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1830.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05524861878 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96475640344 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569060773481 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 579.6 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2996640446 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3157894737 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0526315789 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47368421053 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223138865012 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625313187199 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603561648878 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135226435796 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535292983511 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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