You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.In the letter: explain why you were at the restaurantdescribe the problemswrite about th

Essay topics:

You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.

In the letter:

explain why you were at the restaurant

describe the problems

write about the action you want the manager to take

I am writing this letter to lodge a complaint regarding the meal, which had served to me & my family, was inadequate to eat.

Your restaurant has been playing a significant role, while our family function is concerned. On each ceremony, we used to choose your restaurant in compare with other restaurants nearby. Nevertheless, Last Sunday, 6th April the things went wrong when my family & I went there for dinner on the event of my marriage anniversary.

Indian cuisine, Chicken Biriyani, which we have ordered, is the most popular cuisine in your restaurant. However, this time, the taste is not up to the par. Moreover, the chicken was not fresh; it might be two to three days older and having a pungent smell.

Finally, my precious evening ended up with an atrocious dinner. Though the precious moment and time can't get backed, at least the chef and staff should get a lesson for serving the worst quality food, and my entire expenditure should be reimbursed.

I hope you will take adequate actions for a horrifying experience, that occurred to your one of the loyal customer.

Yours faithfully,

Manas Sahu

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 101, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...er. Though the precious moment and time cant get backed, at least the chef and staff...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, so, while, at least

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 948.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04255319149 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68578385263 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.718085106383 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 279.9 290.88556701 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7370118226 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.1818181818 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0909090909 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 4.34317383033 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121984215757 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402456753849 0.0766984524023 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306967764877 0.0603063233224 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0598995193134 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255793162181 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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