You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter, » explain why you were at the restaurant » describe the problems »

Essay topics:

You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.

Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter,

» explain why you were at the restaurant

» describe the problems

» write about the action you want the manager to take

Write at least 150 words.

The motel I'm in is pretty big, suitable for the activities of my brothers, the one down -alley in a new residential neighborhood, wide -building, across an empty space space, so the room is in the room that's an empty spot. By day, I open the door, the light is in the light.

All over the room. All life is very comfortable, without lighting up the lights, a month's solar fund. Besides the room is the way the manager and lodging upstairs, and every time I open the door, it's a cooling wind that catches the room and catches more light from the sky from the sky. The best inn for me when I rent in Saigon, I love to feel the light of nature and the good air in this room.

Votes
Average: 1.1 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
The motel Im in is pretty big, suitable for the acti...
^^
Line 1, column 163, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: space
...orhood, wide -building, across an empty space space, so the room is in the room thats an em...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 203, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...space space, so the room is in the room thats an empty spot. By day, I open the door,...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a month' or simply 'months'?
Suggestion: a month; months
...rtable, without lighting up the lights, a months solar fund. Besides the room is the way...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...stairs, and every time I open the door, its a cooling wind that catches the room an...
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 32.9175257732 27% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 545.0 937.175257732 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 132.0 206.0 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.12878787879 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38956122427 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23281880097 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 127.690721649 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613636363636 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 163.8 290.88556701 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.5877472446 44.8134815571 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8333333333 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.00632164536018 0.216113520407 3% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.002410987347 0.0766984524023 3% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00539113160078 0.0603063233224 9% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00449184446454 0.12726935374 4% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00449184446454 0.0580467560999 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 82.98 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.67 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 41.2886597938 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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