You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the restaurant and wish to complain to the manager. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant.In the letter:
• explain why you were at the restaurant
• describe the problems
• write about the action you want the manager to take
You do NOT need to write your own address. Begin your letter as: Dear Sir or Madam,You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Manager,
I along with with my family had dinner at your restaurant. We are regular patrons for more than the last five years. As it was my dad's birthday and he loves the food menu your restaurant serves, the taste reminds him of his native place, we decided to celebrate it here. Apparently, things did not go as planned.
Firstly, since it was weekend, I made a table reservation one week prior for eight people on thirteen February at 8.00 pm, however, we had to wait for forty-five minutes before getting the seat. Secondly, the service was not up to the mark, as compared to our previous experience. Apart from that, when I called for a reservation, I also asked them to arrange a pineapple cake; as my father loves this flavour a lot, but they refused to have any in stock when asked for it after dinner, and had to compromise with chocolate cake.
Reservation is made to avoid the queue and the waiting time, it is necessary to keep the table vacant for the customer as per the time scheduled. The training is required for the telephone caller person about the customers' special request on the visit. I would request you to take necessary action to improve your service and satisfaction of the visitors.
I am looking forward to visiting the restaurant soon.
Yours faithfully,
Shreyas Parab
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 9, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: with
Dear Manager, I along with with my family had dinner at your restaurant...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, firstly, however, look, second, secondly, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74347826087 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58463176508 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.2922564159 44.8134815571 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9166666667 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 4.34317383033 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101679670983 0.216113520407 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388166954229 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464118858968 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728716019357 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460805889334 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.