Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
It is an undeniable fact that education plays a vital role in shaping a child's future. It has become a necessity to get at least a primary education for better survival. It is quite evident that with the increase in competency, the level of education has also increased and so is the stress on both teachers and children; many parents believe teachers should restrict giving homework, whereas, others not. Both views are discussed in the below paragraphs.
Schooling hours are barely five to six hours in India; moreover, there are seven to nine subjects in each grade, apart from extra-curricular activities. It is challenging for teachers to complete the curriculum in a given time, that is before the exam schedule. After teaching the basics and highlighting the essential things, teachers prefer giving homework with the deadline to complete. Without questions, it is beneficial for students to self-analyse themselves about what they have learned so far. Additionally, if there are any shortcomings while completing the homework, teachers help them to solve their doubts. Nevertheless, if homework is not given, children might end up wasting their time in leisure activities.
However, with such a vast curriculum; if every subject teacher gives homework, it is stressful for students to complete in a given time. Furthermore, the students who are keen in other activities; like playing sports, practising art, or taking vocational courses, struggle to manage time efficiently. Also, if the kids are persuaded to get only schooling education, they might not be able to skill-up themselves and compete with the corporate environment in future.
In my opinion, there must be a limitation to the amount of homework given to the students; like three to four hours per day is good enough to keep them on-mark for better schooling. Apart from that, if the homework is creative or involves some research outside the textbooks, it can shape the child's future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... compete with the corporate environment in future. In my opinion, there must be a limi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, whereas, while, apart from, at least, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23417721519 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92487932802 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594936708861 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9324734362 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.266666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319337661845 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0948384168754 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645483317751 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180389083476 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742263236933 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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