You visited your friend’s hometown last month and promised to meet him but you could not. Write to your friend
- Expressing your apology
- Explaining why you couldn’t meet
- Suggesting when to meet later
Dear Peter,
I am writing to sincerely apologise for not arranging a meeting with you despite the fact that I was in your city last week. I am really sorry that I was not able to make it as we have not seen each other for ages and I miss you a lot.
To be honest, I thought that I would have enough free time to go out with you. However, as it was a business trip I had to give lectures about a piece of new equipment in our branch office. In addition, the head of the branch asked me to go on a field trip with topographers’ team to provide a demonstration of the equipment work in practice. Actually, I was totally occupied by the training of my colleagues that I even did not have a minute to sit down and relax.
Anyway, I think that we will definitely meet in a couple of weeks because I am coming for my sister wedding and you are invited as well. Let us meet on 8th September prior to the wedding and go together or if you have other plans I will see you at the celebration.
Please, let me know what you will decide.
Take care,
Maria
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 467, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot have a minute to sit down and relax. Anyway, I think that we will definitely ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 266, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lans I will see you at the celebration. Please, let me know what you will decide...
^^^
Line 11, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...at you will decide. Take care, Maria
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, anyway, however, if, really, so, well, as to, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 854.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.10576923077 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45537087908 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586538461538 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 275.4 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.2899515252 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.4 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 4.34317383033 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204868402345 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755453501166 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080466487447 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127533955447 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740996957234 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.56 8.71597938144 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.91 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.