You want to sell some of your furniture. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 1) explain why you are selling 2) describe the furniture 3) suggest a date when your friend can come and see the furniture.
Hello Vipul,
I hope you are in pink of your health. I have good news for you. Finally, I found my new home which I have been looking for last 4 month. My new house is already furnished with all items hence I want to sell my existing furniture before leaving my old house.
There are many wooden crafted items and decorated port exist in my furniture. Moreover I have cupboard to keep cookery items and ready made kitchen points. Modern Double bad is also foldable so it's easy to transfer. There is special wooden crafted petty palang available with saag material.
I really excited to show all that furniture. I think you might like that. I have holiday On 12th December so you can visit my home to see furniture with your family. I damn sure you will like all of them.
I can't wait to hearing from you.
Cheers,
Jitendra
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 79, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...d decorated port exist in my furniture. Moreover I have cupboard to keep cookery items a...
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Line 7, column 75, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...furniture. I think you might like that. I have holiday On 12th December so you ca...
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Line 7, column 167, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...home to see furniture with your family. I damn sure you will like all of them. ...
^
Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I damn sure you will like all of them. I cant wait to hearing from you. Che...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...sure you will like all of them. I cant wait to hearing from you. Chee...
^
Line 9, column 3, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...re you will like all of them. I cant wait to hearing from you. Cheers, ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, hence, look, moreover, really, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 688.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52631578947 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21518150179 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.671052631579 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.1131097315 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.9230769231 76.5299724578 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.6923076923 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235231680697 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083802470442 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0972883724171 0.0603063233224 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152376372538 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105497586983 0.0580467560999 182% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.81 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.