You want to send a gift/present to you friend who has moved recently to a new home. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- Describe the gift
- Why you chose the gift
- Explain on how you plan to deliver the gift.
Dear Soni,
Hi! I am very happy for you and family and congrats for the new house. I am writing to inform some details about the present I buy.
I know you are already guessing as I speak to you on this a month ago. It is a wall clock and I am sure you will like it. The wall clock I got is not digital but manual one and it is a very old piece. You can turn the key to start the clock or use battery also. It has birds in place of numbers, and it is very nice.
I know you like old things and you like to collect so I thought this will be a perfect gift for your home.
I wish I could come to see you and spend time but I am very busy. So, I am sending the gift by Canada post and I will message you the tracking receipt.
I will plan and take a flight to see you in 2 weeks. Till then bye.
Yours loving,
Raji
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Soni, Hi! I am very happy for you and family a...
^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...some details about the present I buy. I know you are already guessing as I spea...
^
Line 3, column 257, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...e key to start the clock or use battery also. It has birds in place of numbers, and ...
^^^^
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n 2 weeks. Till then bye. Yours loving, Raji
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 646.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 3.67045454545 4.54256449028 81% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.78199065724 2.54303337028 70% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568181818182 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 205.2 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1991246357 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 49.6923076923 76.5299724578 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5384615385 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.76923076923 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312598817919 0.216113520407 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103404759348 0.0766984524023 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081969433435 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172719175806 0.12726935374 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619293522584 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 2.6 8.37731958763 31% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 92.12 70.7449484536 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.6 7.45979381443 48% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 3.41 8.71597938144 39% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.08 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 20.0 41.2886597938 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 8.15463917526 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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