You will be graduating from university
You will be graduating from university and would like to invite your family to the ceremony.
Write a letter of invitation to your parents. In the letter:
– Explain that you have completed your studies
– Give details of the event, including time, date and dress code
– Let them know how many tickets they have and who they are for
Dear Nina,
I am just writing to talk to you about my graduation ceremony for the MBA course in I have been
undertaking for the last two years.
As you know, I have been part of the two year masters of business administration diploma course at the
Duke university in Singapore. This batch started last year in May and will end in April of this year.
Although my final exams are going to end on 31st May, the course will officially end 20 days prior to
these tests.
The college have given us a break for two weeks after the last examination and the graduation
ceremony will, therefore, be held on 15 th April which is a Friday in the ballroom of The Richmond Hotel.
This function will start at 6.00 pm but the guests have to reach the venue earlier to find their designated
seats. There is a strict dress code of black tie for students, however, the guests are allowed to be in
semi-formal attire. The event will include dinner and non-alcoholic beverages and will conclude by 10.00
pm.
I have been allocated two couple passes to invite my guests for this function and I would like mum and
dad to join Matt and you for this event. These tickets are chargeable, so please speak to them and let
me know if they can make it to Singaopore.
I can’t wait to hear from you with your travel dates and flight ticket details.
Warm wishes,
Karry
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, therefore, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1134.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 248.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57258064516 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40494363805 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 127.690721649 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616935483871 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.0796258882 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.5 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.29896907216 326% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240366703268 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742829070754 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546735788659 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0721428587215 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510789531391 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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