You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
describe the training course you want to do
explain what the company could do to help you
say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Madam,
Hope you are doing good!
I am writing this letter for your permission and help for a training course which I found in an advertisement in company's newsletter.
This training course is related to data analytics and their benefits in multi-national companies. This is one-week course and requires two hour daily from a trainee. Fees of this course is around ten thousand dollars. It will be very helpful if company can partially fund this for me and also provide me some flexibility on time-management to complete this course effectively and efficiently.
This coursework will enable me to perform lot of data analyzing tasks for our company's supply chain and logistics department. This will also espouse me to develop a data analytics team in organisation for different functions. This effort will help me to provide qualitative insights on company's business performance in market.
I will be grateful to you if you can support me for this training coursework.
Looking forward to hear from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,
Renu
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 140, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
...his is one-week course and requires two hour daily from a trainee. Fees of this cour...
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Line 9, column 227, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n organisation for different functions. This effort will help me to provide qualitat...
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Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...raining coursework. Looking forward to hear from you soon. Yours Sincerely, Ren...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 891.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27218934911 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01130533246 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603550295858 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.9925958477 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.63636363636 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316631714379 0.216113520407 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131051183003 0.0766984524023 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117793532465 0.0603063233224 195% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19432390949 0.12726935374 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115038476124 0.0580467560999 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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